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posted 19th Sep 2012, 2:07 PM

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19th Sep 2012, 2:07 PM

cheezyweezy

Gahh telepathy is hard to convey via speech bubble. That's what the little side conversation between the girl and the dragon is.

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19th Sep 2012, 2:15 PM

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And on a side note, when I was working on the prologue I pretty much took my time with the pages. For a bit the pages in the future will end up looking a bit different as I tried to speed up to a pace (and style) that would work well with a steady update schedule.

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16th May 2014, 9:59 PM

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I feel like there are a lot of good ideas going for this comic so far, but the delivery is very confusing. I'll be blunt here. The artwork is a little lazy, but mostly amateurish. That can be easily fixed with more practice. The dialogue on the other hand is really unclear sometimes, along with the flow of panels and speech bubbles. If you're still drawing this comic then I would suggest studying some books on the technical aspects of comics/art/design. I will keep reading to see how things develop from this point on.

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